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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131
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Right when I think things are going good, The unexpected happens to me, For every good time it seems, theres bad hiding, waiting to be set free, My heart used to skip a beat whenever I saw your face, now when I look at you, I see her in your eyes, Is she what takes my place? She or them, Or however many there are, you can't play with my mind anymore, You've taken me too far, All those lies you said to me, you said to everyone else, I thought with me you'd be different, there's no cure for the pain I've felt... I believed you and fell for every word that you spoke, as sincere as you sounded, its hard to realize your just a joke, I can't look at you and still think these things, because this is not the you that I know, This is someone else, a stranger whose face refuses to show, I don't want to believe any of this, I wish I never knew, as naieve as I can be, to me, none of this is true, The weakness of me just runs back to you, knowing that people don't change, But I cant control the things I do, I cause myself the pain... Was I a fool to think that you were any different from the rest, Leading me on and letting me think that I was the one that you kept, you can't keep me on the side when shes not around, You cant tell me anymore lies, Don't deny it when I bring up the things I found out, The truth doesn't compromise...Don't expect me to come around anymore and act like nothing changed, Don't hide anything from me anymore, Guilt is written all over your face... Are you even happy with her? Do you know your what I used to need, I want to know if any peice of you ever felt the same way about me, Now I'm left here thinking, what did I do wrong, What will I be left with, now that you might be gone? All those things I said before, don't mean a thing at all, It's not my fault I think like this, Your the one who made me fall, Part of me wishes you'd come back, the other leaves you behind, Another part can't seem to let you go, that part controls my mind... |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
If you have any suggestions on this poem, please tell me...I'd love to hear from anyone who can relate or anyone who has anything to comment  ) thank you! |
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Lindsay Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 59South Dakota |
I really like your poem. I can relate a lot to it. I have a boyfriend right now that part of me wants to hold on to, but part of me wants to let him go. Keep up the good work. |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
Thank you so much! Read some of my other stuff....I hope you can relate to my other poems also! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Indecision can truly tear ones mind apart and leave someone numb at the knees, my heart goes out to you as looks can be deceiving but if you follow your heart, despite occasional setbacks, you will find that sincere quality you're looking for! (sigh) This is well-written, sweet friend, the form of this isn't exactly poetry but it reads like it well, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
great write  Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Excellent write. The feeling of rejection is so wretched...but don't worry...you will overcome! I like this, as I do all of your writing. Nice job. Add another to your vote total. As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
Thank you so much for reading, I know this feeling all too well and I'm tryin to pull through...thanks again  "Why do we fall in love when love will only tear us apart" -Ali- |
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