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WindSong
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0 posted 2003-03-21 09:47 PM


This is also about my Aunt...I can't help but to keep thinking about her...I try and try to get into my head that she's not here...but it doesn't work...only writing seems to help....
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Angel watching from above
Light spectrums forming your face
Winds the sound of your voice
I close my eyes as a tear
slides down my cheek,
dripping slowly into eternity.
Night after night I gaze at the sky
waiting for you to appear amidst
the sea of stars.
The current of memories pulling
at my strings, bringing a small
smile to my face.
A sad heart bleeds while waiting
for the sign from the angel
who watches from above.

*******



I lie all the time - infact Im lieing right now!
Today is yesterdays tomorrow.

[This message has been edited by WindSong (03-22-2003 09:18 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-03-22 12:19 PM


Simply beautiful...I loved the imagery! It had a few typo's but other than that it's wonderfully written.
~Live and Laugh~

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

WindSong
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since 2002-12-23
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Long Island, New York
2 posted 2003-03-22 09:20 AM


Thank you...I fixed the typos, I hate when I do that...I'm glad you liked it...Oh and peace love and happiness. ~*~Kirah~*~

I lie all the time - infact Im lieing right now!
Today is yesterdays tomorrow.


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