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Ina
Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2003-03-21 06:38 PM


this is the kinda thing that happens when you're listening to reggae....


Dark room, lights searching
the floor is vibrating
a deep bass zinging in my body
the heat of our bodies
pressed close,laughing
surrounded in the heat
moving this way
strumming hands down your arms
eyes searching
she lalala..boom...muah...
whispering sweet nothings
no one cares, the music is loud
a little salsa...get your groove
let me hold you...
the sweet taste of your sweaty shoulders
cool waters....
I'll pull you close
hands on naked shoulders
smiling, eyes shining
lips moving to the music
"you got me going crazy..."
you can't go wrong
this is how I move...
break it down
arms rippling
look over, friend there
possible new guy over here
let it flow...old school
come here...baby boy
you know what you're missing?
swift movements, sluggish brain
delirious nerve endings
caress me here, hold me there
looking handsome in your jeans and tshirt
simplified party animal
my white shell shoes bang the floor
I got your beat
check out my flow
jean clad legs, tank clad shoulders
up, down, shrug
grab the rim of this golfie hat
pull me close, caress me here
come and catch my flow....

AFTERNOTE:Regina is slightly hyper....oh well...just something light....*sigh* enjoy!
Regina

"Despite all my rage I am still just a rat in a cage, Then someone will say what is lost can never be saved"
-Smashing Pumpkins

© Copyright 2003 Regina Levy - All Rights Reserved
Starsfalling
Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows
1 posted 2003-03-21 06:45 PM


weeeeeeeeeeee
*dances* dance dance baby! haha
damn that was cool to read... gets me wanting to do crazy stuff
-lance

Starsfalling
Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows
2 posted 2003-03-21 06:46 PM


afternote- lance is very crazy and is currently relieving much stress by reading this
-lance

A. L. Becker
Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167
San Francisco, California
3 posted 2003-05-10 10:05 PM


that's exactly how it is girl!!! i love it!!!

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

dani
Junior Member
since 2003-05-10
Posts 46

4 posted 2003-05-11 10:56 AM


wow your words made me feel

i'll live a lie until i die or until you work out why

SilentTears
Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371
Lost and Broken
5 posted 2003-05-11 11:11 AM


This was SUCH a cool poem! I've never read anything like this! My favorite type of poetry to read is very dark, but this was so refreshing! I love it! Great job!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

FlyingCloud
Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151
A little place inside my head
6 posted 2003-05-11 12:39 PM


I liked the imagery in this.
I almost got up and danced! (and just to let you know, I'm a horrible dancer)

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

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