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"turn me on"
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"turn me on" |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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this is the kinda thing that happens when you're listening to reggae....  Dark room, lights searching the floor is vibrating a deep bass zinging in my body the heat of our bodies pressed close,laughing surrounded in the heat moving this way strumming hands down your arms eyes searching she lalala..boom...muah... whispering sweet nothings no one cares, the music is loud a little salsa...get your groove let me hold you... the sweet taste of your sweaty shoulders cool waters.... I'll pull you close hands on naked shoulders smiling, eyes shining lips moving to the music "you got me going crazy..." you can't go wrong this is how I move... break it down arms rippling look over, friend there possible new guy over here let it flow...old school come here...baby boy you know what you're missing? swift movements, sluggish brain delirious nerve endings caress me here, hold me there looking handsome in your jeans and tshirt simplified party animal my white shell shoes bang the floor I got your beat check out my flow jean clad legs, tank clad shoulders up, down, shrug grab the rim of this golfie hat pull me close, caress me here come and catch my flow.... AFTERNOTE:Regina is slightly hyper....oh well...just something light....*sigh* enjoy! Regina "Despite all my rage I am still just a rat in a cage, Then someone will say what is lost can never be saved" |
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Starsfalling Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94some where deep in the shadows |
weeeeeeeeeeee *dances* dance dance baby! haha damn that was cool to read... gets me wanting to do crazy stuff -lance |
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Starsfalling Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94some where deep in the shadows |
afternote- lance is very crazy and is currently relieving much stress by reading this -lance |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
that's exactly how it is girl!!! i love it!!! "Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?' |
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dani Junior Member
since 2003-05-10
Posts 46 |
wow your words made me feel i'll live a lie until i die or until you work out why |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
This was SUCH a cool poem! I've never read anything like this! My favorite type of poetry to read is very dark, but this was so refreshing! I love it! Great job! As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
I liked the imagery in this.  I almost got up and danced! (and just to let you know, I'm a horrible dancer) +Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+ |
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