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Echo
Junior Member

since 2003-02-20

Posts 14
the abyss

0 posted 2003-03-19 11:08 PM

Sitting on my bed,
Late at night,
Blankets wrapped,
Around me tight,
Trying to think,
Just what to say,
To my friends,
The very next day,
‘It’s time to go,
To someplace new.
You understand,
Don’t you?’
I sure will miss,
These wonderful times;
The bike rides,
To the sacred shrines,
Flowing creeks,
Under foot bridge logs,
Out shopping
For brand new clogs,
But the best memories of all
Are after we’re all together
In the fall;
The first of school,
Bored phone calls,
Long emails,
Shopping at malls,
Studying during overnights,
Or better called,
Studying pillow fights,
“I don’t want to go
To this someplace new;
You understand,
Don’t you?”

eyes see, ears hear, mind believes

CSwtThng
Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 124

1 posted 2003-03-19 11:12 PM

I do understand, and I really enjoyed your poem.

AJMGW
Member

since 2002-11-19

Posts 57
Galaxy Roller Rink

2 posted 2003-03-20 12:30 PM

wow That was really neat.
I liked it.

I voted for it.
It flowed
really well.
good job!

Melissa

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

3 posted 2003-03-20 12:52 PM

Loved this poem! It's really good and I definitely understood it well! I can relate! Nice flow and all!

I voted

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-03-20 07:12 PM

I understand this is very well done Echo!
~Hugs~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

5 posted 2003-03-20 07:15 PM

This is very well written, it gets my vote.

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

6 posted 2003-03-20 07:43 PM

everyone has to move on sometime..*s

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-03-21 02:17 PM

(big hugggsssssss) I too dislike this transition, it can feel so uncomfortable and I wish we could all just stay and follow our hearts and choose our direction and not have to be forced to conform this same way! (sigh) I send angel hugs and my vote your way, dearest friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Albino_Jenn
Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 105
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2003-03-21 04:41 PM

I really liked this poem..good job!!
Jenn

**Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life**

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