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Albino_Jenn
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0 posted 2003-03-17 07:20 PM


?Hanging on

Forgotten friendships, love that won’t last
Hurtful words, things from the past
Last year of highschool, last year of friends
Time we move on, as this year ends

New beginnings, with hopeful ends       
Far away places, letters to send
Out with the old, in with the new
Let go of the past, forget what you knew

People moving on, those left behind
Each down a new path, future in mind       
Branching off, slowly letting go
Leaving the things you used to know

Finding new friendship, starting life again
Letting the past go, remembering when
Wishing you’d held on, wishing for the past
Knowing you gave up, let go too fast

People grow, and people change
They grow apart, become estranged
Don’t give up, keep what’s great
Still be friends, through love or hate

Near or far, keep in touch
It’s not that hard, but means so much
Alone in this world, you’ll wish you had
Kept in touch, after highschool grad


**Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life**

© Copyright 2003 Jenn - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-18 12:16 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Jenn, my heart goes out to you, dearest friend, believe me, me and everyone else have went through this difficult time and I still miss my teachers ever so much because they are heroes, and though I had few friends my own age in school, I cherish the memories of the many activities and classes I had! (sigh) Know your friends will never forget you and will always love you, sweet friend, I send comfort angel hugs and my vote your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

PoeTik JusTice
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2 posted 2003-03-18 12:20 PM


Good write! Makes me think about graduating next year, such a scary thought to just leave everything behind! I'm not READY! Well, good poem!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
     *~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

CSwtThng
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3 posted 2003-03-19 01:32 AM


Good poem! Nicely written!!
WhiteRose
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4 posted 2003-03-20 09:05 PM


Very nicely done, enjoyed.
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5 posted 2003-03-22 04:09 AM


Jenn,

I have many people that I wish had been stronger friends in high school, but we have gone our seperate ways and although I think of them once in a while, I'm very happy with the friends in my life now.

                            Dawn

carol
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6 posted 2003-04-12 03:46 PM


Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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