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Teen Poetry #6

Checkmate.

LuckyFelix
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 34
Here.

0 posted 2003-03-13 07:02 PM

New hate sprug from old love.
Most grand, it is to know this again.
Held back by what I thought might work,
and having this demolished...I am free.
This was my final game.
It's mine. I've won.
Checkmate.

[This message has been edited by LuckyFelix (03-13-2003 07:05 PM).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-03-14 01:16 AM

Adam~
I enjoyed the brevity of this piece.
You've said a lot in a very few words.
Well done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

2 posted 2003-03-14 06:52 PM

I love your last three lines

You did pretty well on this one,
the brevity does add to this piece and I like that.
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

3 posted 2003-03-15 08:42 PM

Great write hun. I hope to see a lot more of your writings!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

4 posted 2003-03-16 09:22 PM

i like this poem A LOT, espically the first line. Keep writing...you're really good at it, and I enjoy reading it! ~Jess

"Poetry, she thought, wasn't written to be analyzed; it was meant to inspire without reason, to touch without understanding." -Nicholas Sparks

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