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Teen Poetry #6

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LuckyFelix
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 34
Here.

0 posted 2003-03-13 04:35 PM

I sit, and type,
of horrid blight,
in heart my own,
the source, unknown.
It's all the same,
this twisted game,
That I can't win...
A dreadful sin.
But play I must,
with great disgust.

We together,
were much better...
but now apart.
I have no heart.

Anger consumes,
fury exhumes,
Hates born anew...
...nothing to do...

*Three semi-random poems..title seg. would be appreciated

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2003-03-14 01:02 AM

Adam~
I like these little 'semi-random' pieces.
I'm assuming that you want to keep them together
and are looking for a title for the whole thing.
With that in mind, something to do with 'fragments'
or 'pieces' comes to mind. Perhaps something
along the lines of, 'Fragmented Heart'? Just a thought.
I'm sure you'll come up with the perfect title.
Regardless of the title, I thought they were rather
'catchy' and I enjoyed the read.
Nicely done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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