Teen Poetry #6 |
Am I Wrong? |
Painless New Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 4Roc City, NY |
Am i wrong for trusting him? for believing everything he says? for doing whatever he asks me to? sometimes i wonder if i am he never treated me that good but yet he still comes around and still acts like were as one but really were not were not as one at all why is he doing this to me i want to be with him so much but he still denies denies me over and over but i have found a resolution no more for him i am cutting him off until....until he starts listening to me listening about my wants and needs so he'll see what its like what its like to be me so am i wrong for doing this or am i wrong for giving him a second chance? |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
Welcome to pip, Nice first post, I'm impressed, it was very well written. Can't wait to see more of your work ~*~Karen~*~ |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
I won't give a damn about guys. If they don't treat me right the first time, out to garbage goes. But then you are not me. ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought the poem expressed a very big problem some people have. They think that being with some one means living for them. Nope nope....... you don't have to do everything he says. You don't have to put up with him anymore. It's all a choice you make. You might like him a lot, but does it mean you have to disrespect yourself by putting his needs before yours? What I mean by that is..... you're not a slave, and you live for no one. Love doesn't only mean companionship and so on, it's a form of understanding. If he doesn't understand you, maybe he shouldn't.... and maybe you should just move on. Good luck and welcome to Passions. Keep posting!! -j- Look at the sun and burn your eyes. You'll be fine in the end. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Welcome to Passions Decisions are interesting things. More often than not we cut off our nose to spite our face and burn ourselves in the process. In the end you've got to do what will benefit YOU as emotions seem to dictate what we can and cannot do. You've posted a piece that I'm sure a lot of people will relate to in some way. I hope to see you around the forum but remember to reply as well as post. Enjoy it here. ~AF~ "Write something, even if it's just a suicide note." -- Gore Vidal |
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Painless New Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 4Roc City, NY |
thanx guys i write how i'm feeling and i didn't think it would get that much recognition but thanx L) peace |
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