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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Im sinking further into this depression, And there is no one to pull me out. Day Dreaming doesn't help Im more alone than I have ever been. So many things pull me down Hope grows farther away Things will never change, I'll always be this way. Im lost in so many tears And drowning in the ones that will never spill. I will never find a way out From this darkness that has fallen. The past makes things worse The present is my pain And the future is a shapeless blur That fills me with despair. There is no way to convey my pain I can't pass it on to others, it won't be shared. They can't feel it's depth, Consuming me as it is. WinterWren |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
Nice poem, my favorite lines are: "Things will never change, I'll always be this way. Im lost in so many tears And drowning in the ones that will never spill." It's so sad, yet so very true. Nice work ~*~Karen~*~ |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Awww *BIG HUGS* Beautifully written. If you need someone to talk to, feel free to email me / add me to your messenger list if you have MSN. I hope things start to get better for you. Sometimes you find a friend where once there wasn't one. Sometimes you find a love where once there was a friend. |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
this is so sad! but i've felt this way many times...its getting a little better for me, hope it does for you too. Jenn [This message has been edited by BrokenDreams (03-08-2003 05:26 PM).] |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
sorry i'm back to add it to my library. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Karen: Thank you for the nice comments, Im glad you liked it. Skyfire: OH, hugs are always welcome, Thank you. Jenn: Im glad you can relate and that it's getting better for you! WinterWren |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Steels a lil something from you...*Bows* Steph- This was simply wonderful. I love thel lines "Im lost in so many tears And drowning in the ones that will never spill." This whole poem of yours explains how I feel so very often. We all know what it's like, some more often then others. I will do my best to help you, email me anytime..I'm sure you know about my new email [email protected] in case. *Hugs* Don't know you, but I know you. Peace Love and Happiness! ~*~Kirah~*~ I lie all the time - infact Im lieing right now! |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Ohhh...I always love the things you write and I'm sorry to see this unhappiness. It was, as usuall, well written full of imagery and emotion. I love the title to on a side note! ~Live and Laugh~ People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today. |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
Beautifully written! I'm sorry to hear things aren't so well, but I hope in time that it gets better for ya! (Hugs) XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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