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Teen Poetry #6

Finaly

scubagurl02
New Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 4

0 posted 2003-03-05 05:02 PM

I have lost so many in my life.
It is hard for me everyday,
not to pick up a kinfe.

I sit and I wonder
I watch and I stare.
Is there any one else out there?

Who has felt my pain?
Or heard my cries?

I feel like I am on a train,
Headed nowhere, full of lies.

Then suddenly to my surprize,
I catch, from the corner of my tear filled eye,
The love and warmth in a cute boys eyes.

He takes my hand
Says don't be scared,
Your heart, your soul,
I am here to mend.

All of my life I have been searching,
Searching for someone
And when I am looking the least,
I have found the one,
take my hand away from the gun.

I will never know how to repay him
All I can do is promise that everyday
I will say "I love you"
You showed me the way to heaven.

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

1 posted 2003-03-05 08:48 PM

Very cute...I loved the journey in here and how you found your light. I wish you the best and may it only get better from here =)
Keep posting..I like your style.
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

2 posted 2003-03-06 07:19 AM

Nice poem, I really liked it.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

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