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Teen Poetry #6

Thank you(I havent quite thought of a good name yet)

PoeTik JusTice
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since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

0 posted 2003-03-05 02:51 PM

I just realized something! Lately I've been writing sad poems, although I'm not too sad, so I've decided to write a bit of a happier one! Tell me what ya think! Thanks

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Born into the world, with a slap and a cry
You loved me from birth, and you didn't have to try
Although I was rough at times, you held a flame to my heart
Sometimes you were furious, yet you never wanted to grow apart
Life was hard on all of us, yet you stayed when she left us alone
I never take the time, I never appreciate your voice on the phone
Now it's time to acknowledge, it's time to recognize
All your rules and grounding, is love in disguise
Today is my special day, we're supposed to celebrate 17 years of life
Yet I feel like we should be celebrating you helping me through the strife

Thank you Dad, for helping me get this far

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

[This message has been edited by PoeTik JusTice (03-05-2003 02:55 PM).]

NSnaomian
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since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

1 posted 2003-03-05 09:01 PM

That was sooo cute! Awww, I don't have a recognition of my father's love...yet! Maybe I will do that one next. I liked this a lot, but I am getting tired of the rhyming...that's just me though.
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

frolicking dolphin
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since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

2 posted 2003-03-06 03:05 PM

I really liked that poem

It made me think about how I really don't recognize my dad in that way yet, nice work.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-03-06 08:26 PM

(smiles) Oh Serena, this is a beautiful dedication of love to those who have helped you get to where you are now, sweet friend, God Bless You, you make them real happy too and always will, God Bless You, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Serena, thank you for sharing!