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Teen Poetry #6

Tears.

LuckyFelix
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 34
Here.

0 posted 2003-03-03 04:34 PM

Three tears slowly fall,
and my mind races wildly,
looking for a way out,
for a way to escape.
Then realization that
they're not for what I though,
but for themselves alone.

"Like waiting for something you know isnt coming..."

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

1 posted 2003-03-03 06:20 PM

Short and sweet, I like it.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

LuckyFelix
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 34
Here.

2 posted 2003-03-03 06:25 PM

heh heh..thank you

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2003-03-03 10:03 PM

short, sweet, and sad. good write.

Jenn

think about this: everyone you know will someday die.

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

4 posted 2003-03-04 03:50 AM

This is absolute and utter rubbish!!!

OK, read above line and invert opinion.

Yep that's right it's that good!

There should be a psychology of feet. For do we not make decisions with our legs and walk about on our brains? What do you mean "No, not really"?

boy and his spirit
Junior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 41
within my heart

5 posted 2003-03-04 10:25 AM

I disagree, this isnt rubbish in the least!! I believe that all poetry is beauty in itself, and this is just some extra beauty. This is a truly great poem. I will be visiting your work.

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

6 posted 2003-03-04 01:18 PM

I like this alot, you have a really great talent!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

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