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Teen Poetry #6

Come Again

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-03-02 09:18 PM

I'm dust in the wind,
come again, intellect.
Show me how to think properly.
Correct me.
I'm light,
and easily swayed by this storms every whim.
Come again,
and make me wise.
Open my eyes, so I might know, wrong from right.
Come again light,
that bit of brightness from beneathe the door.
Shine on me, make me whole.
Someone show me how, quick.
Because every breath I take
brings me closer to death.
I'm murdering myself, slowly, surely.
Come again love, and warm my skin.
Cause I'm alone and empty, enveloped in sin.

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

1 posted 2003-03-03 06:25 PM

That's so eery (spelling?) But very emotional, nice poem.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

2 posted 2003-03-04 04:10 AM

I really enjoyed this...
I am at a loss for words and it feels really weird I've never lost words before...
Arrrggghhhh!

There should be a psychology of feet. For do we not make decisions with our legs and walk about on our brains? What do you mean "No, not really"?

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