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Teen Poetry #6

Lonely

Chloey
Member

since 2002-09-29

Posts 74
in a silver mustang convertible

0 posted 2003-02-24 09:21 PM

I am so lonely
loneliness brings tears
i wish i had a friend
someone to be here

near me beside me
when ever im down
i try to call a friend
but no one's around

So now I just sit here
friendless and lonely
thinking all the friends i had
must have been phoneys

If you don't like the way I am.....screw you!

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

1 posted 2003-02-24 09:52 PM

I remember the first time I got that feeling, and that's exactly how I felt, nice way of putting your thought onto paper (or whatever you want to call this LOL)

Karen

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2003-02-25 01:44 AM

I hope the lonliness you felt in this poem is over. It's not fun to feel so down. The poem was cool though. Hope to read more.

Look at the sun and burn your eyes. You'll be fine in the end.

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

3 posted 2003-02-25 08:17 PM

This one was good, I think I read it while you were writing it ( if that makes any sense ), but I love the last stanza, it's so cute. Anyways good write.

Riley

Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

Chloey
Member

since 2002-09-29

Posts 74
in a silver mustang convertible

4 posted 2003-02-25 09:13 PM

Tanky Tanky Everyone!

If you don't like the way I am.....screw you!

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