Teen Poetry #6 |
Yeah I do |
AJMGW Member
since 2002-11-19
Posts 57Galaxy Roller Rink |
They say, "you don't know what love is" But how can we not? "you're just a kid" Yeah and so were you. "You don't know what you're talking about" Well I think I do. How can you say that I don't know love? I mean, I Love You ^*~AJMGW~*^ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Yay!!! You go girl! Every one knows love, what matters is how we use it or how much we use it, and you truly show unconditional love through these words to your friends and loved ones, I love it! (smiles) This has my vote, sweet friend, in so few words you say so much, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
this is so cute! I love it. Its short, sweet, and expresses the emotions well. Jenn think about this: everyone you know will someday die. |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
I think this is very cute!!! And very good, and true! Everyone knows love...and everyone will know heartbreak. Its something that everyone experiences...even if they may be a kid, they still are intitled to it. For me, love is well known, and not very well hidden. Lol! Hope to see more from you! This does have my vote (incase u were wondering) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Love comes in so many forms and for someone to negate it is so devastating. Good topic for a poem. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Opps forgot to vote. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (02-26-2003 12:34 AM).] |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
so true...in so many ways... yet I won't claim...I know love... Voted for you |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Great job |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
It brought a smile to my face and I ain't half a miserable sod, so well done! This is so simple and effective that you've got my vote, friend. There should be a psychology of feet. For do we not make decisions with our legs and walk about on our brains? What do you mean "No, not really"? |
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boy and his spirit Junior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 41within my heart |
love is so important in life and it comes in many ways. i agree with the message you send wholeheartedly. everyone told me i was too young to love but of course that is never the case. |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
I love this poem! It's so cute and true! You got my vote XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
Very nice poem, you got my vote ~*~Karen~*~ |
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