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AJMGW
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0 posted 2003-02-20 12:15 PM


Don't tell
me it will be o.k.
Don't tell me it will be
allright. My life will change,
My life will never be the same, never!
Don't tell me everything is wonderful now!
My life,a different world,no one I know,
will be around to help! life as I know
it will be over in a matter of a seconds.
And I can't change
anything!


So is life really
Wonderful
now?


^*~AJMGW~*^


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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-02-20 05:10 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Melissa, this is touching, sweet friend, I think we can all come out of these experiences but I know with all my heart that everything will improve, time will ease the hurt and the robin shall restore amends as Shakespeare says! (sigh) Keep your chin up, sweet friend, God Bless You, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-20-2003 05:10 PM).]

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-02-20 11:51 PM


This is so well written. I really like it, though it's sad......   :

hugs,
Ethel...garysgirl

Jenn Cirrincione
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3 posted 2003-02-21 09:05 AM


I think we've all felt like this.
It gets better, or so I hear.
Jenn

"Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me."

Pollita
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4 posted 2003-02-22 07:55 PM


Melissa, Man oh man can I relate to this piece.  It's very good, yet truthful.
Are you alright? My e-mail address is crazyclown188@hotmail.com
If you ever need anyone to talk to, Im here for you. Thank you for sharing, and hopefully things will turn out better for you. it's all in a matter of time...Atleast thats what "they" say.

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5 posted 2003-02-23 02:37 PM


Hello Melissa!
Nope, life surely does not sit still, it is in constant change. Be glad of that, and thankful that those bad days can roll over into good ones, even if it seems that change takes too long sometimes.
Click, into the book lineup.

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6 posted 2003-02-25 05:47 PM


I have to agree with Kacy for if we didn't have the bad days we sure couldn't appreciate the good ones, but that doesn't make the bad ones any easier to take.  

          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

aries_luv_ppl
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7 posted 2003-02-26 04:01 PM


sometimes I feel this too... sometimes I feel I'm powerless to change... yes, sometimes nice word do nothing in healing... but I hope you will strive to be happy... cuz if not you, who will make you happy?

~Every girl has a dream within.

Titia Geertman
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8 posted 2003-03-21 02:40 PM


Getting my vote

Titia

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