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Sun of faith Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 101 |
Ill stand here Tall, strong and proud Waiting quietly in the breeze Waiting for someone to notice me. Like a tree, they over look me They dont even care. Eyes glance straight passed me Not knowing what they missed One day ill be gone And people will cry They wonder why they didnt notice me They'll wonder why they didnt care. Like a tree Ill wait for you... |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
You know I have thought of that...and if they never noticed me, why would they cry? I just figure they will go on with their lives and not give a poo...(yes I said poo) Anyway. This was beautifully written..great image of you standing there as a tree, all in one, if you know what I mean. Yay! Laura Though, no one ever knows what I mean. Ok, I'm done blabbering now.  "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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Sun of faith Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 101 |
Thanx for the coments, i do understand you. |
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