Teen Poetry #6 |
Depression |
Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
Alone again Me, Myself, and I... My only friends What have I done? Why have I been robbed of my sun? Can I not be happy too? Must life always be blue? Everything seems amiss Nothing feels like it should Tonight just isnt my night Why have I befallen this blight? Is there some ominous wrong that I must right? I dont know why I wake up with only the desire to cry My options are few All I can think of, I tried What should I do? To be happy, Just like you. ======================================================================================================== Give me honesty... brutal honesty :P |
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Quiet Acquiescence Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 70somewhere out here |
wow. i so felt this one. nice job. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I loved this one, especially the 2nd stanza. Wonderful, heartfelt poem. Great Job! WinterWren |
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Sun of faith Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 101 |
nise stuff, i felt it, like all the feelings came back to me. Great job |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) What I'm about to say is brutally sincere; true happiness begins with YOU! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, dearest friend, I too have been there, then when I learned to love myself, things have improved greatly! You must believe in yourself, find an awakening, believe you are a being of light, then from there embrace the world and let them see your smile! (sigh) I send my prayers your way, dearest friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paragon, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Depression sucks....honest feelings you write!!! KEEP WRITING!!!! Bridgette |
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