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Pollita
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the unknown realm of insanity

0 posted 2003-02-13 07:29 PM



Sorry guys...This is more like a story...On a poetry site!!! still...I posted it because of the challenge for this month.
~Thanks for reading~
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It's hard to believe that once in my life there was a time where I was emotionally lost.
There would always be something wrong, something would always be on my mind.
...But an angel saved me...
As if I were his own blood, he's always help and try to protect me.
It's truely a blessing to have someone as caring as I do.
Those are the type of people that one should cherish.
Of course for me, that person is Alex.

If I had a problem I can always count on Alex to make me feel better.
No matter what the problem is, he always seems to make me smile and laugh.
Whenever I need someone to talk to he's always there, and has a way of comforting me without saying a word.

I dont know how I'd get through the day without him there, making me realize that there is a reason to live.
Everyday I cant help but think about how lucky I am to have a friend like him

If I could have one wish granted I would seriously wish that I'd live my life with Alex right there beside me and that I could be there for him just as he's constantly been there for me.
Although I know that I cant be there for him as much as he's been there for me.
It seems Impossible...

He's so amazing, He's done so much for me already and yet he's still backing me up.
No one knows how much he means to me.

I dont know what I'd do if I ever lost him.
I'd go insane and cry for days.
He means so much to me, To be honest---He means more to me then I could ever say.

Im so increadibly lucky to even have someone like him caring about me.
Alex is very important to me, and all who read this would agree that he is a great guy.
If I ever lost him I'd die...

Alex is my sweet angel and I love him.



© Copyright 2003 Delaniie Quirk - All Rights Reserved
cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........
1 posted 2003-02-13 08:39 PM


ehlow childer vooman leydi *grins*

this is sweet del, i'm sure he'll  love it.

Congratulations! It's a bisexual!

Pollita
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the unknown realm of insanity
2 posted 2003-02-13 08:46 PM


Thank you cherish...too bad im not feeling too well right now...That wasn't what I was expecting to hear....I thought I was gonna get another lecture for thinking the way I do...yup that means Im officially upset...again...maybe me and you can talk tonight...I have no school tomorrow so we can talk all night or tomorrow.
thanks for reading

cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........
3 posted 2003-02-13 09:05 PM


nope, no lectures here. i'll talk to you soon mmmkay?

now he's got to write one about you

Congratulations! It's a bisexual!

NSnaomian
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since 2002-07-22
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In my troll closet I be
4 posted 2003-02-13 09:42 PM


That was cute! I hope you are okies...
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

WinterWren
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...Coming to
5 posted 2003-02-14 12:27 PM


That was really sweet! I don't think anyone will mind that it's not really a poem.
I enjoyed reading it.
You do tell Alex all that right?

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

Pollita
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the unknown realm of insanity
6 posted 2003-02-14 12:55 PM


thank you everyone for reading!
and winterwren:
I sometimes tell him..but I normally dont have to...He already knows...Or atleast I'd hope he knew...LOL!

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7 posted 2003-02-15 02:01 AM


Hehehehe...I loved this! Especially reading it a second time *winks*

Vekrdehk fyc dra uhmo drehk E fyc kuut yd...pid, yd maycd E ymfyoc vuikrd vun fryd E pameajat eh...

Pollita
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the unknown realm of insanity
8 posted 2003-02-15 10:29 AM


Aww Thank you alex! It's a good thing that you liked it...exspecially the second time you read it!

vlraynes
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9 posted 2003-02-20 06:43 PM



Pollita~
This is a wonderful tribute to Alex.
I'm glad that he's been there for you
and that you two have such a great friendship.
This may not be a poem, but it is definitely
a welcome response to the challenge.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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