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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
Am I in love with you? or just the memories you left lingering on my lips? Only we knew the love we shared that night. I know you felt it; I could see it in your eyes The gentle touch, the soft embrace. Was it real? Or just a feverish dream? Whatever it was, the memory is still on my mind like a veil, in everything I do, see, and think. You're gone now, but theres still a whisper of you on my lips. Will you come back? Come and renew yourself to me. Are you worth my tears? All we had was onw night. But it was so much more that that. Because I fell in love that night. So you need to decide, make up your mind, Is this for real? -dedicated to Dusty Jenn [This message has been edited by BrokenDreams (02-16-2003 09:27 PM).] |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
Welcome to Passions! I found your poem quite interesting and though provoking while being romantic at the same time. I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (Please check your e-mail for a special greeting.) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Jennifer~ This is a nicely written piece and a great choice for a first post. Welcome to Passions. I hope to see lots more from you.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hey Jenn, Love the name!  Welcome to passions, this poem was a really great start into our world, very emotional. You can only improve with practice, so don't stop writing!! Jenn "Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me." |
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