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BabieDoll
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since 2003-02-13
Posts 268
BFE

0 posted 2003-02-15 06:07 PM


I feel so vunerable
So naive
Every time your hand touches my skin
My body melts to a puddle on the floor
Making me want to stay.

So intimidating
So true it seems
When you tell me you love me
Caught in your web of love and lust
You lust for me
I love you.

I feel so sorrowful
So meek
When I know you deceive me
Yet I can't make my heart believe it
I can't bring myself to leave.

So intruding
So hurtful
Your words to me can be
I do not deserve this treatment
And I know this
But my feet feel bolted to the floor
Holding me down
Preventing me from walking away.

I feel so guilty
So ashamed
I love you
But I am so unhappy
Debating if you truly love me or not
Yet I can't get away from you. *

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

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molly_the_dolly
Junior Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 25
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2003-02-18 12:05 PM


good write. I know how you feel.
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