Teen Poetry #6 |
The Dream |
WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
The Dream I once dreamed that you were near. I once dreamed we were close. I once dreamed that you saved me from self-destruct. Vivid imagery allowed me to make your facial features visible. The warm feeling that you are holding me tight against you. Comfort and protection fly through your arms as you squeeze to show that you care. A hug filled with passion and delicacy. You try not to cry but you can't help it. We'd always dream of being together but what I thought was our dream, was only mine. I dreamt of what used to be not what's now. I'd always dreamed of us falling madly in love. The dream of you holding me as I cry and I look at you with great empathy and value everyting there is to value. Just to be near you in this dream is incredible. It almost feels as if you standing right next to me, watching over me. A gentle touch of your hand captures my love. The dream becomes stronger and deeper. Standing arm in arm underneath the moon lit sky. I awake from that dreamy place and remember that that dream will never be. |
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Victoria7 Junior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 21 |
sad but i really liked it |
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Waterbirdfly Junior Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 32China |
A beautiful poem,I like her.Your poem make me thinking of my lover, who have lelf from me.Thanks. |
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OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245 |
Oh my God. That is so... perfect. I know exactly how that feels right down to the end. ALL OF IT is like you copied my exact thoughts... it's a sad thing. I hated when that happened to ME so I hate that it happened to you. GOOD WRITE. My favorite ever. |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
very sad but worded well. Jenn think about this: everyone you know will someday die. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
This just might be one of my favorites of yours. Course I say that about alot of them VERY good! Wonderful! That one's goin in my library. WinterWren |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Thanks everyopne! Sorry if I wasn't able to reply to all your replies sooner...My ex-boyfriend...most recent one...infaltrated where I get mail so I had to do all this stuff...ANYWAY! thank yoU! i'll try to get here more often..I feel bad for not replying to all of yours. :-( to :-) I lie all the time - infact Im lieing right now! |
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