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molly_the_dolly
Junior Member

since 2003-02-12

Posts 25
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-02-12 11:42 PM

About this poem:
i wrote this for my boyfriend, he is a very special person, but sometimes i wonder if im special enough for him.

The first time I saw you,
Sitting at the bar.
I couldn’t stop thinking about you,
Even all the way home in the car.

The second time I saw you,
My heart skipped a beat.
You asked for my number.
I’m so glad me got to meet.

You came to my house
To have a beer.
You gave me our first kiss,
That I still hold so dear.

When we snuggle
Your skin, next to mine.
Your kisses and huggles,
This is our special time.

I am a lucky girl,
To have you as my boy.
You make me so happy,
Believe me you are very special not just a toy.

My world is so different and new,
Now that I have you.
But sometimes I wonder,
How could this be?
A plain Jane like me
Nothing special or exciting,
I wonder why would you want me?
Could this be a dream?
Please if this is a dream I never want to be waken,
Not even for my favorite, Pumpkin pie with whipped cream.

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

1 posted 2003-02-13 12:11 PM

hey that was a very nice first post.i loved it. i have a boyfriend too who's also very special.so i feel u on everything u said, from the cuddles to the kisses.keep posting!u sounded kinda real young.was wondering how old u were.

**Only the wise can dance to the tune of life**

AJMGW
Member

since 2002-11-19

Posts 57
Galaxy Roller Rink

2 posted 2003-02-13 12:48 PM

Sweet! Welcome! hey it's really nice to hear that love could work out. Really nice first post. just double cheak the spelling of things,"me got to meet".(We got to meet)but over all nice job!
~AJMGW~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2003-02-18 01:56 AM

molly_the_dolly~
This is a very nice poem for your boyfriend
and an enjoyable first post.
Welcome to Passions.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

4 posted 2003-02-18 09:04 AM

Welcome to passions!! This was beautiful. Oh man, this was awesme...I can't wait to read more...~*~Kirah~*~

I lie all the time - infact Im lieing right now!
Today is yesterdays tomorrow.

molly_the_dolly
Junior Member

since 2003-02-12

Posts 25
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2003-02-18 10:29 PM

Thank-you all. He enjoyed this very much, i actauly found it in a frame beside his bed.

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

6 posted 2003-02-19 07:20 PM

sweet, welcome

your bf must have loved this write.

~Every girl has a dream within.

Waterbirdfly
Junior Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 32
China

7 posted 2003-02-19 10:14 PM

Your Bf is very happy because of you and yor poems.Love him for ever!

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