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Teen Poetry #6

never knowing

wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

0 posted 2003-02-12 08:34 PM

If I had went with him
would i be like her?
all of my friends fall away
a baby on its way
I'll never know
but, questions the "what ifs"
are a waste of time
I hold on to the past to long
when there is someone infront of me
but, I know they are looking in the past
deep and long they gaze into her eyes
the eyes of hate a fear
they find love and exception
something i will never understand
for i am ready, with a smile
for him to look at me once
and then I will know everything
for I will be in love
but, until them i am stuck in the hole of
unknowing

*kinda confusing i understand*

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

[This message has been edited by wvplayernotreally (02-13-2003 12:39 AM).]

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

1 posted 2003-02-13 12:06 PM

it really was confusing...but isnt poetry? however i was wondering if "acception" was a real word.i never heard of it.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-02-18 01:26 AM

Malloree~
Confusing or not, I enjoyed reading this one.
I thought you did a good job of expressing the
feelings in this piece.
Nicely done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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