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Fall Further From Our Mind
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Fall Further From Our Mind |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... 
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Falling fast I've got you charmed. You've lost the stress, soft kiss. No longer alarmed, you rest, here now comfortable, in my arms. It's you and me, in this cleft. Shed our tears and seek a peace. Let extasy be deft our guide, fall further from our minds. This love is passion bent, our self-made charity, this new reality. |
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molly_the_dolly Junior Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 25Ontario, Canada |
great poem, very deep |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
Absolutely loved it! Yes, very deep indeed and cute too. Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Well, thank you, you two.  ~Titus Es ist gut, daß das Leben die Toten studieren sollte. |
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Ephraim Junior Member
since 2002-12-07
Posts 24 |
A different take on love; well done, PoetryIsLife. Good length, good flow. Actually... perhaps a bit too short?  Glad I read it, sir. E [This message has been edited by Ephraim (02-15-2003 06:20 PM).] |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
great poem!  ~You can make more friends in two months by becoming interested in people, than you can in two years by trying to get people interested in you.~ |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
 Titus "On the plains of Hesitation lie the blackend bones of countless millions, who, at the verge of victory, sat down to wait, and waiting - died." |
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