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infinite disaster
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since 2003-06-01
Posts 69
Illinois

0 posted 2003-06-08 09:32 PM


Holding her breath
She enters the world
Surrounded by shields to protect her
She enters, confident
Sure she is doing things right
Nothing can harm her with her shields of armor
She faces something she has never encountered
She falls to the ground, with dents in her shields
She comes up, willing to fight again
Only to hit the ground again
More bruises and more cuts
Scared she’s losing control
She turns for stability
More havoc does she find
Now holding back her tears
She wishes she has never entered


Yeah, so this isn't my best work either. The end of it is not the best. Again, I'm sorry.

© Copyright 2003 Akie - All Rights Reserved
snoduck
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since 2002-11-15
Posts 99
Selah, WA
1 posted 2003-06-08 09:43 PM


very emotional.  me like

-Erica-

a deer in lifes headlites
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since 2003-06-04
Posts 23

2 posted 2003-06-08 10:46 PM


so it isnt your best it's still good and I liked it.
lingering thoughts
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 70
Illinois, USA
3 posted 2003-06-09 01:47 AM


hey good poem ... hmm shields , sounds familiar. hehe well i like it
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