Teen Poetry #6 |
Shield of Armor |
infinite disaster Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 69Illinois |
Holding her breath She enters the world Surrounded by shields to protect her She enters, confident Sure she is doing things right Nothing can harm her with her shields of armor She faces something she has never encountered She falls to the ground, with dents in her shields She comes up, willing to fight again Only to hit the ground again More bruises and more cuts Scared she’s losing control She turns for stability More havoc does she find Now holding back her tears She wishes she has never entered Yeah, so this isn't my best work either. The end of it is not the best. Again, I'm sorry. |
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snoduck Member
since 2002-11-15
Posts 99Selah, WA |
very emotional. me like -Erica- |
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a deer in lifes headlites Junior Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 23 |
so it isnt your best it's still good and I liked it. |
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lingering thoughts Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 70Illinois, USA |
hey good poem ... hmm shields , sounds familiar. hehe well i like it |
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