My life,love, and sorrows.(part 1)

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Teen Poetry #6

My life,love, and sorrows.(part 1)

NeverSayDie
Junior Member

since 2001-01-18

Posts 39
Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND

0 posted 2003-01-31 02:55 AM

The mirror twist
my body numbs

I hope for sleep
but nothing comes

I think of things
perhaps im mad

Sitting here alone
Im also sad

She was my friend
but that may change

Her colors showed
now things are grave

And now I worry
Her life at risk

I shouldn't care
but my heart insists

The way I will act
has not been changed

My feelings are know
but my mind is frayed

She left me pain
with no remorse

And now I fear
things have run their course

She's losing herself
To a horrible addiction

Her hope is gone
she lost all conviction

The road is long
but at the end

I'll be there for you
I'm still your friend.

Susie
Junior Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 36
Illinois

1 posted 2003-01-31 08:32 AM

i really like that one~i really got into it and i could really feel it.it was really deep and thats part of wut makes it so great. keep postin cuz u really have a talent

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