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Teen Poetry #6
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NeverSayDie
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since 2001-01-18
Posts 39
Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND
0 posted 2003-01-29 08:02 PM


What if we where animals

Oh wait we are

Or aren't we

Maybe

I can't see

Hatred

Pain

Love

Its crazy

Changing lanes I miss the turn

Forgeting things because of thoughs

My love is there but hers is not

I think I see

But im confused

And now my thoughs drift to you.
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Dean
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada
1 posted 2003-01-29 08:13 PM

Great poem!! I like it alot! Keep up the good work and I hope to see alot more from you!

James Dean ;)
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