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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
Miscreants produce my temporal life Death rips lakes of blood to torment me Eternity and power in every arid woman Her bewailing sun lust is what he loved Jittering away with obdurate screams The Ugly Girl whispers trenchant storms Crassly self poured for a cunning cry Not Me! Are you that gratuitous? Knife this, espresso men! Spray puppies in his garden True ache and protuberance take me Beating this from a bitter shine Fiddle out, when black is light Heave deliriously, that potent Red My sacred Music & Friend |
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OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245 |
That was really good. It was hard to analyze and I admit I visited dictionary.com twice for that, but it was good once I understood it. I like your word choice in that one, thought the theme isn't as strong as some of your others, but the writing is still amazing. Good job! |
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