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Victoria7
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since 2003-01-28
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0 posted 2003-01-28 10:17 PM


this is my first poem that i have put out for others to read. i hope you like it


I’m Getting Over You

Everyday
The pain hurts a little more
You have your hands wrapped around my neck
I can’t seem to get my self free
Your grip is so tight
I try so hard to get away
WhenI escape you catch me again
And drag me back in
You control everything
My heart, my feelings, my emotions
Your friends want me, but why can’t you
I would do anything to make you want me once again
I try to be skinnier, make my hair a little straighter, smile when I’m really hurting deep down inside
I’m just a little toy you play w/ when you want
Your so on and off
I never know what to think
One day I feel you still want me
The next day you look at me as if you never cared
This emotional roller coaster I can no longer do
What ever it takes I’m going to get over you
The spell you have me under I’m going to break
I’m no longer going to hide under my sheets and dream
Dream that your going to come back
Because your not
Your not going to make me cry myself to sleep any more
This is reality I have to face
You moved on so quick
Left me in the dust
Now I am letting go
Your twisted ways and thoughts will no longer do
Your little sly smile, I’m going to ignore
You will not suck me back in with your flirtatious taunts
Because I’m getting over you


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jennilynn
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since 2002-11-11
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1 posted 2003-01-28 10:39 PM


I like. I recently went through the same thing. keep writing, I;ll keep reading.

-jen-

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Kicking Kim
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2 posted 2003-01-29 05:27 AM


This is a good one Victoria, I've been away from Passions for quite a while nowe because I had a dry patch but I really like what I'm seeing here.  You are quite talented!  

^*~Kim~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

moonguardian2004
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since 2002-12-01
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3 posted 2003-02-02 09:33 PM


hey, i totally relate to this poem. you expressed you emotions wonderfully. i found myself crying myself to sleep many nights. it will take awhile but you sound strong enough to pull through it!

Keep writing!

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4 posted 2003-02-03 11:21 AM


I think everyone can relate to this one eventually. Brilliantly emotional.

Jenn

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5 posted 2003-02-03 12:00 PM


Hey ,
           Welcome to Passions, this is a great first post and a great poem, thank you for sharing it with us

Andrew

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AJMGW
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6 posted 2003-02-03 12:13 PM


I think that almost made me tear. That was really good. Some times some people can say things better than others. Most of my poems are on the same topic (geting free). You have put it w/ so much emotion.
In shorter words Good Job!
~AJMGW~

WindSong
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since 2002-12-23
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7 posted 2003-02-03 08:57 PM


WELCOME! For your first post, beautiful! I want to read more! Keep sharing with us! It's good you move on, it's healthier, believe me...I went/am going through the same thing with an ex of mine...Sad really...Took me a year...But I'm almost there...Great job! Can't wait to read more! ~*~Kirah~*~

I lie all the time - infact Im lieing right now!
Today is yesterdays tomorrow.


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8 posted 2003-02-04 01:32 PM


Ive been in this situation...or atleast a similiar one. You cant let people have this much control over you...i know thats easier said then done...but i hope you realize...if he doesnt really like you for you..then whats the point?? Great first write hun...im glad you shared this..WELCOME TO PASSIONS

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

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