Teen Poetry #6 |
Im getting over you |
Victoria7 Junior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 21 |
this is my first poem that i have put out for others to read. i hope you like it I’m Getting Over You Everyday The pain hurts a little more You have your hands wrapped around my neck I can’t seem to get my self free Your grip is so tight I try so hard to get away WhenI escape you catch me again And drag me back in You control everything My heart, my feelings, my emotions Your friends want me, but why can’t you I would do anything to make you want me once again I try to be skinnier, make my hair a little straighter, smile when I’m really hurting deep down inside I’m just a little toy you play w/ when you want Your so on and off I never know what to think One day I feel you still want me The next day you look at me as if you never cared This emotional roller coaster I can no longer do What ever it takes I’m going to get over you The spell you have me under I’m going to break I’m no longer going to hide under my sheets and dream Dream that your going to come back Because your not Your not going to make me cry myself to sleep any more This is reality I have to face You moved on so quick Left me in the dust Now I am letting go Your twisted ways and thoughts will no longer do Your little sly smile, I’m going to ignore You will not suck me back in with your flirtatious taunts Because I’m getting over you |
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jennilynn Junior Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 29here with me |
I like. I recently went through the same thing. keep writing, I;ll keep reading. -jen- |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This is a good one Victoria, I've been away from Passions for quite a while nowe because I had a dry patch but I really like what I'm seeing here. You are quite talented! ^*~Kim~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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moonguardian2004 Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 64MA, USA |
hey, i totally relate to this poem. you expressed you emotions wonderfully. i found myself crying myself to sleep many nights. it will take awhile but you sound strong enough to pull through it! Keep writing! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I think everyone can relate to this one eventually. Brilliantly emotional. Jenn "I keep looking, looking for something more." Sara Evans |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Hey , Welcome to Passions, this is a great first post and a great poem, thank you for sharing it with us Andrew |
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AJMGW Member
since 2002-11-19
Posts 57Galaxy Roller Rink |
I think that almost made me tear. That was really good. Some times some people can say things better than others. Most of my poems are on the same topic (geting free). You have put it w/ so much emotion. In shorter words Good Job! ~AJMGW~ |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
WELCOME! For your first post, beautiful! I want to read more! Keep sharing with us! It's good you move on, it's healthier, believe me...I went/am going through the same thing with an ex of mine...Sad really...Took me a year...But I'm almost there...Great job! Can't wait to read more! ~*~Kirah~*~ I lie all the time - infact Im lieing right now! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Ive been in this situation...or atleast a similiar one. You cant let people have this much control over you...i know thats easier said then done...but i hope you realize...if he doesnt really like you for you..then whats the point?? Great first write hun...im glad you shared this..WELCOME TO PASSIONS Standing on the edge of the world |
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