Teen Poetry #6 |
Charades! |
Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
i'm a widow, grunged-up and lazy, latent and missing in .3person resting my jaw in the cracks of my shoulderblade when i say it, i say it and mean it threetimes the stars you think i mean and i'd like to let you know, i'd like to, i'd,love be here with me palisade mesophyll you get it, you know what's gonna swallow us now |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
I know I'm tired, and in the midst of homework, but, I honestly cannot guess what this is. What a lovely poem. Very well written, just like your work always is, Carly. ~Titus Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored. |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Sleep? |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Sleep wha? Mmmmm...sleep...well no..it isn't sleep. And Titus, thanks Hint: "palisade mesophyll" is very very important. "Gather ye rosebuds while ye may, |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oh god!! Carlita, this one is on the tip of my tongue but it's just not coming out. I can see it...but it's kind of blurry. ARGH!!! Thank you for sending my brain into insane mode - lol. This is a good one - I like it. Now if I could figure it out, it would be even better. I *will* come back to this. ~AF~ "Write something, even if it's just a suicide note." -- Gore Vidal |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Elizabeth! Well yanno, that blurry space is where I live.. Get out while you can... Good luck. ~Carly "Gather ye rosebuds while ye may, |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Ooh great read as usual Carly, do I have a clue? *shakes his head* it's wonderfully written though. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Something to do with a garden? Resting in a garden? Yes. I used an online dictionary. ~Titus Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
A spider being attacked by a bird. Something to do with a spider, something in nature - oh god damnit! lol "Write something, even if it's just a suicide note." -- Gore Vidal |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hehe...I'm picturing that..go spider, go spider Titus was closer than the rest of you, I spose. Nature yes. Nature. Plants, yes. Keep looking. ~Carly empty-armed |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
It's a spider being eaten by a tree! One of those trees from The Wizard of Oz! Right? |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Brian - LMFAO! Thank you for THAT mental image. Ok - how about a dying flower? Something dying? "Write something, even if it's just a suicide note." -- Gore Vidal |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Tell us, tell us! ~Titus Es ist gut, daß das Leben die Toten studieren sollte. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Never!! mwuahahah... empty-armed |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
I'm lost I don't have a clue what it is I'm just kickin it up |
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ZetaCel Junior Member
since 2003-01-30
Posts 18 |
Acorn. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
A...vegetable jumping off a cliff? Grass? o_O; I'm stuck on palisade and mesophyll. Is this some kind of...veggie plant? o.O Whoa. COOL. O.O |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I think it's about time we had an explanation, this is bugging me |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Nooo Palisade mesophyll is the layer right under the upper epidermis of a leaf. It contains chloroplasts. Something happens within chloroplasts.... empty-armed and half a soul to go -el sol --Zwan [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (02-03-2003 03:36 PM).] |
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ZetaCel Junior Member
since 2003-01-30
Posts 18 |
Photosynthesis. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Yes! So..the narrator is...? empty-armed |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
You're having way to much fun with this, and that is no lie. ~Titus Es ist gut, daß das Leben die Toten studieren sollte. |
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ZetaCel Junior Member
since 2003-01-30
Posts 18 |
Water or sugar? Enough of the guessing, this poem is way too confusing for me! ---------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
The...sun? o_O; Carbon dioxide? A leaf? I'm going with the sun. ^^ *nods* Though...I have my doubts. TAKE THEM AWAY! *covers eyes* |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
A spider, damnit! "Write something, even if it's just a suicide note." -- Gore Vidal |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
*takes away aaaaall of Leah's doubts* ...The sun it is empty-armed |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Ganker. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Sharer! empty-armed |
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