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Teen Poetry #6

Tear Full of Emotion

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

0 posted 2003-01-23 10:20 PM

~*A poem I wrote before going to bed last night 1/22/03...A kind of solemn moood I was in I guess...Here goes...Tear Full of Emotion*~

One tear falls from a lonely heart,
One tear falls from a crying mind,
One tear cries a melody of great sadness.

Tear full of emotion.

One tear falls from a burning eye,
One tear falls from a sea of madness,
One tear cries a melody of great sadness.

Tear full of emotion.

Over and over, one after another.
One tear falls forming a puddle of empty love.
One tear cries a melody of great sadness.

Tear full of emotion.

One tear falls fomr a happy memory,
Memory of happiness lends the boost to let go.
A river begins, a pool is made.

All tears come together, making a drop of life
fall from tear to tear.
One tear full of glad.

One tear cries a melody of great sadness.
That is the tear of emotion...

*Mistakes are made, you pay for them, then you do it again.*
~*~Love doesn't make the world go 'round, it just makes the ride worthwhile~*~

[This message has been edited by Acies (02-06-2003 01:01 PM).]

barbaraj
Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 139
Nova Scotia, Canada

1 posted 2003-01-24 03:31 PM

your poem was really beautiful. i also enojoyed the format. really great all around. (that didn't hurt too much did it?

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jennilynn
Junior Member

since 2002-11-11

Posts 29
here with me

2 posted 2003-01-24 05:22 PM

I like it. it kind of reminds me of teh song tears of pearls by savage garden.

-jen-

love is life

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-01-25 05:59 PM

This one is very good! I like it ALOT!
Dang now you have so many poems I like how could I ever chose a favorite?
hhmm, it might be this on or the dancing on air one.
I think you might wanna do some spell checking on this one tho

Great Job!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

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