Teen Poetry #6 |
Untitled (challenge) |
Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Pent up inside not let out Never fully freed. I cause you illness I cause hurt I am hidden But what am I? |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Male chastity? .. Just kidding... Hope I don't get lynched for that one. Yikes! I'd say it's... nostalgia, maybe? I'll put more thought into it, rest assured. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Rhonda...you already know that I know...so just hugs. Okay...even more hugs. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
My guess would be feelings or love, but, that isn't always hidden, most often isn't. But, besides Parasite's first guess I can't think of anything else. A shorty, eh? I like it, ~Titus Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
A chest burster like that off alien? |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
LP - LOL nice try, but not quite. Nostalgia? Nope, sorry Vicky - back Mum Ti - feelings or love.... nope Andrew - Yeah that's totally it (for the record, that's NOT it) |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
LMAO @ Andrew Hmmmm...a---poem which REALLY wants to be written? :S You know the day's gonna be bad, when you start it off---with Sephiroth at your door, demanding his toaster back... |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Your heart? stabbing in the dark here *makes stabbing motions* ~AF~ "Write something, even if it's just a suicide note." -- Gore Vidal |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
not sick are you? eeekkk....ummmmm....bitterness or anger? *makes a stupid lost face* well i tried....(sorta) regina |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Gaseous matter? Oh, nope, wait, that doesn't stay in. ~Titus Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored. |
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