Teen Poetry #6 |
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what does a tree think? |
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moonguardian2004 Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 64MA, USA |
a little girl swings from a tree her hair blowing in the breeze her curious mind begins to wander as she thinks of something to ask the trees and this is what she asks......... how can you stand so strong yet in the night you seem to cry she didnt think that they would answer but this was their reply have you ever just swayed in breeze with the feel of the wind within your soul emotions flowing as rough as the seas know one day that you could make your heart whole all this was to much for her young mind she tried so hard to remember all the things compared as the trees watched the wheels turn in her head all they came to see was a blank stare she decided to ask her question again she was determined to understand the reply the trees, understanding that they were dealing with a child decided to give it one more try rewording their answer, they tried once again and this is what they said: have you ever felt wild and free and that nature is all you live for yet you also feel a longing a longing for something much more in the winter we have a longing for sun this is why you hear us cry yet in the summer we long for fall when our colors are personified so when you see us standing tall it shows that we are wild and free yet when you her us crying just know that we are saying.......... THAT YOU CAN ALWAYS COME TO THE TREES |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I like this one alot too!! Dang, I don't know which one I like better, this or the last one I just replied to. They're both soo good! You really have alot of talent. I enjoy your work alot. Well done! Again! WinterWren |
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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
dude that was cool...i am going to look at trees a little different now " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
this was really kewl i really liked this poem alot i read it cuz uv the title but im really glad i red it cuz it was really good. did i say really to much??LOL CATHY "I am who I am who I am who am I?" [This message has been edited by foreverwithyou (01-21-2003 09:53 PM).] |
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