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Teen Poetry #6

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wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

0 posted 2003-01-21 06:24 PM

I know you hurt
I can see it everyday
I want to help you
hold you, show you I care
I used to be like you
hurt, torn, broken
Everyday I hear you calling out
who are you calling for?
Have they ever answered?
If you won't leave your corner
can i be broken with you?
together we will sit
ponder lifes questions
if that is the only way to be with you

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

snoduck
Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 99
Selah, WA

1 posted 2003-01-21 07:23 PM

oh wow... this really reminds me of my ex boyfriend Tim and I. Oh sheesh... i really like this, how you say that you were once hurt, torn and broken, and that you would be broken also, just to be with them. how sweet!

-Erica-

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

2 posted 2003-01-21 07:28 PM

This is kinda sad, but at the same time not... It sucks to be hurt. Oh well. I'm not now, so life's good. Hope things work out with you n' this guy... Good luck. Thanks for posting this, it was good.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-01-21 07:40 PM

Great poem! I really liked it, and I can relate to it, which always helps. Wow! I just really liked this one. GREAT job!!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

moonguardian2004
Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 64
MA, USA

4 posted 2003-01-21 09:43 PM

that is a great poem! i wish my ex felt like he wanted to help me in what i am feeling. it sounds like you have a wonderful way about you! keep up the good work!

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