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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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I wrote this poem today in History, also... About how me and my gf are 1800 miles apart, but sometimes it feels like we're not. Anyway, your thoughts are appreciated.  DISTANCE There are times that I can feel The warmth of your kisses Though still you are so far away Sometimes I wonder if distance is real Or if it is only there If you let it be... - Cody - |
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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
Thats good...i felt bad because it was all by itself so i decided to post. Good job. i liked it alot. even though i am not experiancing it :-\ " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Awww, I'm sorry you two are apart! I liked the poem, though. and I loved the two ending lines "Or if it is only there if you let it be". Best of luck, and keep writing! |
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smurf_gurl Junior Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 19US of A |
Hey there, dork. :p 'member me? haven't talked to you in awhile...you still on aol? if you ever see me on, send me an IM every now and again, I miss ya... anyway, yes, it was a wonderful poem. nd i wish you and your girlfriend the best of luck  Boredom is killing me... |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Hey guy!! I really like this one!! I think that this one is actually my favorite so far and it's the shortest one yet! lol! But sometimes simplisity is the best way to make it work!! Live and laugh and make sure to always have Bella Amor (beautiful love) |
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