Teen Poetry #6 |
the one i usse to love |
punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
you are the one i used to love you were the one that kept me safe you were the only one that was there you are the one i used to love you are the one i used to love we used to talk all the time we used to be close......... you are the one i used to love you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Robin~ Hi there...great to see you posting again. There is such a deep sadness in your words. I felt every bit of this as I read, and it touched my heart. Very nicely penned. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (01-15-2003 02:51 AM).] |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow... Robin... beautifully done |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Very well written. Love fades, people move on, life goes on, eh? Thanks for sharing - Cody - |
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