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Teen Poetry #6

Lost

Chel2082
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 40
Baltimore, MD

0 posted 2003-01-13 02:10 PM

When I needed you, you weren't there
When we talked, you weren't there
When we were together, you weren't there
Your mind was somewhere else
I was lost

When I looked at you, you weren't there
When I sang to you, you weren't there
When I called, you weren't there
Your heart was somewhere else
I was lost

When I cooked dinner, you weren't there
When we went out, you weren't there
When we fought, you weren't there
You were somewhere else
I was lost

The problem was that you have always wanted to be where I wasn't
Your mind, heart and soul was somewhere else Without you I am lost

Where am I, in your life?

With GOD all things are possible, true friends stab you in the front...~*CHEL*~

[This message has been edited by Chel2082 (01-14-2003 11:03 AM).]

wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

1 posted 2003-01-14 12:18 PM

I liked it first mind goes then heart then all of a sudden the person is gone. This is the first I have read from you and it is super good...hope to see more

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

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