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Yesterday a Cold
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Yesterday a Cold |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Yesterday a Cold Vivian So aka. Eliza Simmons (c) July 25, 2002 Yesterday a cold, Today I'm healed. If only all pain Come and go like a sneeze- Morning wind brings solace- Sunset is more... AMAZING. Yesterday... A cold passed by... Today I... I look back and... And I... Don't feel sorry... for yesterday. I look at it... With a comfort... in my heart... Yesterday a cold, Today I'm healed. If only all pain Come and go like a sneeze- Morning wind brings solace- Sunset is more... AMAZING. Yesterday a cold, A cold I... forget... Yesterday... I learned that... A cold is a past. Eliza Simmons Maybe I am not praying...but I know... |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
That was really different, but I liked it alot! It was truly very good. Is that somewhat supposed to be like a song or does it just repeat? In any case, excellent write! WinterWren |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
usually I hum along when I write...like songs that we hear...and I kinda pick out part of the song and repeat the melody as I write...so I don't know. It doesn't have a tune...cuz I don't know how to write music. Maybe I am not praying...but I know... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Vivian~ I enjoyed reading this. Very unique inspiration you had here. Nicely done.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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