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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
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" One Kiss " (12/01/03) © 2003 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved Verse 1 Like a fine cup of coffee on a sunday morning, The first sip of you just takes me away. Lots have tried and more have failed to be all that you are A true Marilyn Monroe of today... You're the song that I love to sing, Every hearts biggest secret wish. My shelter from the rain and wind, You bring me to life with one kiss... Refrain One kiss, Is all I need from you. One kiss, I promise that it's true. One kiss, just one kiss From you. To make everything right. One kiss, To built an endless night. One kiss, just one kiss From you. Verse 2 I can eat a good dinner at a fine restaurant, But It will never taste as good as you. A sunset is beautiful like candy to my eye, But doesn't move me the way that you do. You're the song that I love to sing, Every hearts biggest secret wish. My shelter from the rain and wind, You bring me to life with one kiss... Refrain |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Oh wow!! I liked this so much!! It was so beautiful! I'm guessing it was intended as song lyrics and it would be the best song! It is also a lovely poem! I know exactly what that feels like, this poem spoke to me! Thank you for the smile! Live and laugh and make sure to always have Bella Amor (beautiful love) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Brian~ This is beautiful. You've got some great lines in this one. Nicely done.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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