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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-01-11 10:56 AM

I look upon the town,
all its beauty and lights,
all its sounds and attractions,
   But amongst all its beauty
All I can think about is
   How much I wanna hold you
   How much I want to be with you
   How I long for your arms to be around me
So many things stopping me
   I wish it wasn't so
   I know you can feel me there
even when I'm not with you
   You complete my heart
   You make me whole
So many things I wish I could show you
But this fear of something I can't explain is
    to much to bare...

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

1 posted 2003-01-11 11:06 AM

This was the really good.
I understand very much, the feelings that you showed in this poem.
Most people go through the same thing, such as I.
and you showed your emotions in this poem very well, It's a great poem.
I really liked it.
thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Again, Nice poem!

ForGetMeNot087
Junior Member

since 2002-12-08

Posts 15

2 posted 2003-01-11 03:31 PM

Thats a really good poem its really sweet. I know a lot of people who feel that way.. well keep posting ur stuff i wanna see more of it .. lol.. im waiting... BYEBYE

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

3 posted 2003-01-11 03:35 PM

I liked this. Kinda a different style, but it worked really well for the poem. Thanks for posting.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2003-01-15 12:55 PM

Spine Grinder~
I enjoyed this very much.
Beautifully done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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