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Teen Poetry #6

The Jury's Decision

dancegoddess05
New Member

since 2003-01-04

Posts 1
Texas....gag

0 posted 2003-01-10 07:21 PM

a hug
  a simple embrace
           he won't think of it
          she will dwell on it
           he has other women
           he has another life
          she crys
              lies awake at night
          she whispers
              writes pages
          her worries keep pouring in
             because the jury is out
          she thinks
              and prays
             about many trobles
         what to do
         how to act
         who to ask
         when to move
         where it'll happen
         why didn't he make the move
           he's older
                only four years
           he's wild
           he's gone
                he left
            and he disappered
         until the jury is back in
        so he's a distant dream
                and I will wait
         for the jury's decision.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2003-01-10 09:52 PM

Welcome to Passions in Poetry, dancegoddess - Check your email for a special greeting...

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-01-15 12:31 PM

dancegoddess~
This is a wonderful first post and I enjoyed reading it.
You've poured a lot of heart into this piece and it shows.
I look forward to reading lots more from you.
Welcome.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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