Teen Poetry #6 |
Friendship fading |
ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
Sorry i know i just posted yesterday, but i had to put this one out here, i wrote this because of a friendship that i have that is currently losing it's enjoyment and is becoming more of a concern than anything else, here's the poem. I didn't think you'd call Didn't wanna believe you wouldn't Watching any sign of hope fall Do this to you, you know i couldn't Held our friendship up so high There's nothing i wouldn't do for you Can't understand your reasons why Know with you i've always been true With that said I must confess Our lack of communication makes me upset Poetry the only way I could express Can't turn my head to this and forget No secrets is the way I feel I can't help but think I care more And that's just me being real My friendship is not a revolving door Once your in, your here to stay Regardless of problems there are solutions Things won't always go the perfect way Our friendship is like an evolution Constantly growing in a new way But this growth does take two I'll be there for you without delay A friendship I need, how about you I understand you are busy I'd make time for you Can't you find some time for me Or is this friendship not for you All I want is a friendship that's great No one could be better than you We must not waste time before it's too late So let me know your point of view |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Wow! I think this is great, and I hope your friend reads this and things work out. I know what it's like to lose a friend... *~Rich~* "You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!" [This message has been edited by HopelessRomanticGuy (01-04-2003 11:06 PM).] |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey, this was reallllly good! i've been through this b4, hope it all works out! ~samantha~ "sometimes i just feel like |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Shady~ I think many of us can relate to this in one way or another. It can be very difficult when a friendship becomes one-sided, and I hope that doesn't happen with this one. You've expressed your feelings for your friend very well, and your heart is showing clearly in this piece. Your friend is fortunate to have someone who cares so much. Beautifully done...I hope it all works out. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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