Teen Poetry #6 |
Starlight, Starbright |
*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
My best friend in the whole world's dad is On the Abraham Lincoln, the navy ship that got turned around and sent back to the gulf when it was only two weeks away from getting home. This was her dad's last time serving on a ship and he has already been gone 6 1/2 months! So she wanted to tell him how much she prayed for his saftey and wished for his quick return so I wrote this for her to give to him. Before I went to bed tonight I wished upon a star I told him to look after you No matter where you are I told him I was thinking of you although your far away And I asked him to keep you safe So that you can come back to me someday I told him I really love you And yes my dear it's true I pleaded him to watch over you 'till the day dawns bright and new I told him all about you and how amazing you are And hoped that we were wishing On the same bright star I said that when you hold me all my troubles fade away And I begged him to keep you in safety untill your home to stay I talked about your courage I told him about your might Andwished for him to protect you all throughout the night So starlight, starbright It's my daddy's face I see tonight So I wish I may, I wish I might Have the wish I wished tonight I know that the last stanza is off of a cliche but her and her dad used to always wish upon the stars so I thought it was appropriate, and to all of you that have someone specail away fighting all my hope and support and love goes out to you! Live and laugh and make sure to always have Bella Amor (beautiful love) |
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Susie Junior Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 36Illinois |
i really liked the idea behind the poem and it seems like she's a good friend, I hope her and her dad both like cuz I sure do and your friend's lucky 2 have a good and talented friend like u~keep postin~i always LOVE readin your poems! |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
Awww how sweet! I hope her dad returns home soon and safe! You know...I haven't read a poem of yours so far that I don't like! XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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jeffwillett Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 86Texas, US |
i like this poem, im sure he'll love it |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Thanks for the comments guys! I gave the poem to my friend yesterday so she's emailing it to her dad tonight, she really like the things that I said so I hope that he likes it to. Having a parent away from home for long periods of time when your close is always hard..But such is life right?? Live and laugh and make sure to always have Bella Amor (beautiful love) |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Sweet poem, very good! You really have a way with words. I hope you go far with your poetry. WinterWren |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Bella~ Wow...this is such a beautiful and heartfelt write. Your friend is very fortunate to have a friend such as you, and I'm sure she appreciated this very much. This touched me deeply...nicely done. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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