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Teen Poetry #6

Stuck

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

0 posted 2003-01-08 10:23 AM

Pushing up that mountainside
Tracking lands remembered only in me
Liveing my once understood existance
Which is now misquided by complexities
Sorting through the countless directions
To find the right road in which to travel
(This could take a while.)
Echoing laughter cuts through me
It's hard when doing the right thing
Isn't cool.
I guess im just stuck.
Calling warnings of memories lost
leaving nothing but spitfire wastelands
Littered with cracked shells of men
They were stuck too.
In giant flypaper they ceased to move
And now I join them...
Stuck.

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

1 posted 2003-01-09 03:55 AM

Nicely done, Sam. Nice length, good verbage, a slightly perplexed but generally calm demeanor...

do continue on.

~Titus

"A life unexamined is not worth living."
-Socrates

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