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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-01-07 08:50 PM

Dance around in circle
Music will soon take care
Of your sorrows and doubts.

Dance around in circle
Music will soon cease
Your hopeless...and give you life.

Dance around in circle
Music will soon release
You from stress.

Dance...dance to the beats,
Sing along or just mumbles.
Dance...dance to the beats,
Tip-toe along or jump around.

(change key...elevating)
I-n dancing...we
Forget who we are
I-n music...we
Warm sensation overcome loneliness.

Yes, there are songs that
Linger unhappy moments
In our senstive touches.

(change key...elevating)
Somehow those songs bring
Another kind of peace
And memories back
To those who reminisce...

(slow)
Dance...dance to the beats,
Sing along or just mumbles.
Dance...dance to the beats,
Tip-toe along or jump around.

(change key...elevating)
Dance around in circle
Music will soon take care
Of your sorrows and doubts.

(echo...)
Dance around in circle
Music will soon cease
Your hopeless...and give you life.

(fade...)
Dance around in circle
Music will soon cease
Your hopeless...and give you life.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.
~my fragile heart is yearning for help; who can help me,if not me?

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (01-07-2003 08:51 PM).]

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2003-01-08 02:07 PM

I wanna go dance in the rain now!
(I love rain)

This makes me feel worry free.. for just a moment. Thank you!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-01-15 04:06 AM

Vivian~
I love the positive feel of this piece.
Thanks for the smile.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-01-16 03:59 PM

Great poem! Beautifully done! I soo loved this piece! I especially liked the line, "Yes, there are songs that linger unhappy moments in our sensitive touches."
Wonderful!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

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