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Teen Poetry #6

I'm Sorry

a deer in lifes headlites
Junior Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 23

0 posted 2003-06-08 11:53 AM

I'm sorry the sun doesn't shine as bright as it used to
I'm sorry you feel your worlds coming to an end
I'm sorry you feel you can't be strong
I'm sorry you haven't found what your looking for
But most of all i'm sorry I can't be there for you now,
The time you need me more than ever

This is a new one it's the second oe ive written in an hour after having writers block for 3 months so i'm proud of it.Tell me what you think.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

1 posted 2003-06-08 01:19 PM

I think you are R O L L I N G.....!

The deer got some sunglasses to ward off those headlights.....

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lingering thoughts
Member

since 2003-05-03

Posts 70
Illinois, USA

2 posted 2003-06-08 02:59 PM

hey ! nice poem i like it even tho its kinda short but its to the point , ive noticed all your poems are sad ... are they about someone inparticular or just in general ?
well anyways keep writing steve!

infinite disaster
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 69
Illinois

3 posted 2003-06-08 08:48 PM

hey steve! awesome write once again. keep up the good work b/c i love reading what u write!
after 3 months of writers block, i'm proud of ya steve!
much love, akie

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

4 posted 2003-06-08 09:07 PM

Oye, I know all about writers block, and yes, I agree, you are on a role! This is good, and I can sympathize with the feelings expressed here, although to think of it, I suppose thats what most of us come here for, to find people who understand. Anyway, this was a great poem!

-Rich

Forever I will stand
always here with you.
Now stay and hold my hand
and together we'll go somewhere new.
~Rich~

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