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lonelyone2032
Junior Member

since 2002-11-17

Posts 13

0 posted 2003-01-06 09:05 PM

*PUZZLED*

I’m sorry, mad, and sad,
All at the same time.
I only wish you knew.

I’m sorry I’m not all I can be.
I’m sorry I’m not into the party scene.
I’m sorry I don’t give myself away.
I’m sorry what you’re missing out on,
‘Cause my love would always be here to stay.

I’m mad ‘cause you don’t love me.
I’m mad ‘cause you don’t want me.
I’m mad ‘cause all I hear are lies.
I’m mad ‘cause you say, “I Love You” everynight,
When it means everything to me and nothing to you.

I’m sad ‘cause I’m devoted to you.
I’m sad ‘cause I can’t turn back time and have never met you.
I’m sad ‘cause you can’t tell me the truth.
I’m sad ‘cause I want to move on,
But all I can think about is you.

I’m sorry, mad, and sad,
All at the same time.
And now you know why.

hey guys thanx for reading! tell me what u think!

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

1 posted 2003-01-06 09:09 PM

Aww...*tear* That sounds horrible. I know how it feels when someone says they love you and it means nothing to them and the world to you..wow it sucks! Best wishes! Hang in there.

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

2 posted 2003-01-06 09:12 PM

I got so caught up I forgot to tell you...Nice poem! I liked it alot!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

jeffwillett
Member

since 2003-01-04

Posts 86
Texas, US

3 posted 2003-01-06 10:17 PM

very good poem

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2003-01-06 10:56 PM

That was a very good poem, nice way to end it. I liked this one alot, well done!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

5 posted 2003-01-07 09:14 AM

I really liked this poem. Nice job. I like how you described why you feel the way that you do. I can completely relate to this. Good luck!

-Jeanette-

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2003-01-12 01:46 AM

lonelyone2032~
I really enjoyed reading this piece.
I like the way you chose to give each emotion
it's own stanza and then pull all three together
at the beginning and end of the poem...very effective.
Very well done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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