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Teen Poetry #6

Light A Candle

vipersumo
Junior Member

since 2002-05-17

Posts 10

0 posted 2003-01-05 08:38 PM

Light a candle at dinner
To guide our way
The light of the fire
Makes everything okay
The flame will burn bright
And add warmth to our hearts
Even when the silence
Is ripping us apart
The coldness in our eyes
Is invisible through the light
As long as the candle is burning
Everything will be alright
We’ve all given up hope
No matter how hard anyone tries
At the end of every day
The candle always dies.

~kate~

jeffwillett
Member

since 2003-01-04

Posts 86
Texas, US

1 posted 2003-01-05 09:50 PM

nice, the candle definatly represents something to me...

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

2 posted 2003-01-06 02:58 PM

I loved this poem, you have a really good talent. I think I just might have got thrown off a bit on what exactly was going on...but that is the beauty of poetry, everyone can interpret it differently!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-01-06 06:16 PM

That was a really good poem, I enjoyed it alot. You have alot of talent. Beautifully expressed!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2003-01-11 07:47 PM

vipersumo~
This is a lovely write and wonderfully expressed.
I truly enjoyed reading this.
Nicely done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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