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roxywrestlegirl04 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 74good ole DINWIDDIE |
Red White and Blue These colors mean alot to me and you They may not mean much to others But to you, I know this much is true Red stands for the blood shed to defend this country's name Blue stands for the tears your family cried when you went of to fight for our home in this war game White stands for the purity of your heart for laying down you life Whether you realize it or not, you've rid this world of alot of strife Even after you're long gone Your name will live on One thing alot of these other soldiers dont know is you've got a great heart to go along with this military show You're known as a father of three kids and a great husband to a beautiful wife but you'll be remembered as a proud soldier who would have given his LIFE. live,love,and die...but take RISKS..thatz what makes life worth the living, love worth the heartache,and death the new beginning! |
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Stinky Twinkie Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 204Dinwiddie |
Bam! I didn't really like this poem.......but I do think that is had some deep emotion going into it. It does tell the "story" (for lack of a better word) of many of the soldiers. Not my favorite but I'll give you an A nonetheless. -Stinky Twinkie- |
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roxywrestlegirl04 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 74good ole DINWIDDIE |
well....i dont think that many people will like it...but it was for my dad...so..i thought id post it and see..haha...lata! live,love,and die...but take RISKS..thatz what makes life worth the living, love worth the heartache,and death the new beginning! |
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